What a hard map to rate!! I gave high marks for creativity and desighn as it is evident that a lot of work went into the map. Unfortunately the map is way to difficult and tedious. Great design features are overused and I got tired of slying black dragon after black dragon. Also the instructions were non existant. Please let the player know if he is supposed to play a certain race. Also by selecting every race to trigger your message events, it means most are triggered before the player gets there and you can't read them.
A great effort, and I think this mapmaker will soon be making maps that I will rate higher.